Tuesday, November 15, 2011

My I Am Poem

I Am
I am nice AND creative 
I wonder if people can see the future 
I hear Birds singing 
I see a magical world inside me
I want to see morning light on flowers 
I am nice AND creative

I pretend to know everything like you
I feel a great change around me that’s sparkly
I touch the magical water of heaven  
I worry about my future plans 
I cry when my world is dead 
I am nice AND creative 

I understand life might not stop to make changes 
I say believe in yourself for better chances 
I dream about real fantasy powers in human world 
I try anything that does not hurt me 
I hope to see my star on screen 
I am nice AND creative

2 comments:

  1. Hello Aparna:
    This is Sally :D I really like your poem about yourself! It is true and reveal your identity clearly. Your usage of languages is very beautiful and deep. I love the phrase "I touch the magical water of heaven." I am not sure, but is it rain that what you mean? I think all water comes from heaven, and waterfall just directly drop down from the celestial world. Water means life. "I cry when my world is dead." This is a very poetic sentence! To me, the lost of hope is the death of my own world, how about you? In general, I love reading your poem!

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